Overall, your proposal was clear and well-structured. You did a great job of outlining the objectives and aligning them with the funder's priorities. The background research was thorough, and I can see you've put a lot of effort into ensuring that the project’s goals are achievable. A few areas for improvement: Clarity of Budget Breakdown: While the budget was outlined, I think it could benefit from more detailed explanations for some of the larger expenses. A bit more context here would make it easier for funders to see how their money will be spent. Impact Metrics: It would be helpful to include more specific, measurable outcomes. Including clear metrics for success will make it easier to evaluate the impact of the project after completion.